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Clapham Line Laughs – #99wordstory

Sheila slowly headed into adulthood, 
a late starter in a bustling city.
Catching the 8.00 am train
at Clapham Station.
Unfortunately,
stood in some dog ordure
and tried unsuccessfully
to rid herself of the stench.
She would be late for work
and needed to catch that train
to sit beside another.
A chatty chap boarded the train,
with his lyrical Jamaican accent,
tried his darndest to flirt
with the friendly woman beside her.
Gooseberry Sheila had
never laughed so much
with this likeable rogue
and his corny one-liners.
All thoughts of dog ordure vanished,
and so did his chances.

11 thoughts on “Clapham Line Laughs – #99wordstory”

    1. Totally agree, Neil. Meeting people at any age is full of challenges and even more compromising. The best way I’ve found is to get out and do what you enjoy and all else falls into place.

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    1. That encounter was during the 1980s, and for a young woman from NZ, London was an eye opener. It was my first time hearing a Jamaican person with a Cockney accent. I still remember that experience quite vividly.

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    1. Thanks Ruth for the lovely comment. No, I haven’t heard of it. I’ll have a look for it. Or do you have a link? After all these years it is still a vivid memory that makes me smile.

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